Rin and Asuka The Next Morning

Story Line Dead.

Edited June 22, 2018 by Guest

Just when you thought the two were actually going to get along, it was all a dream

 

I like the outfit Asuka's wearing. The lock on the sweater gives it that extra touch.

 

Not tempted by Saber's food choices this time! Although, I do like you have the progression of what she's eating disappearing until the restock of what looks like two different sticks of pocky.

Saber sure scarfed down that ice cream!

 

I kind of feel sorry for Rin. On the other hand, there's something a little karmic about this...

 

Rin and Yukino seem to be actually getting along here, which is good. And Hannah is a truly incredible person, trying to see the good in everyone. Also, she's very cute in the Refreshing Sailor style dress.

 

Asuka looks great in her punk outfit too. The rock star look suits her personality.

I was like ok, ok, ok, What, NOOOOOOOO. You ruined Asuka say it is not so. But thank god it was a dream. Great story by the way. You can see it starting to billed up. Whos going to draw blood first. I like Asuka but I would have to put my money on Rin.

I was really hoping for an happy ending. But it would not be Asuka them.... I really hope she is not so mean to Rin as she was t Shinji....

 

Scripple, you will have to be extra loving towards Rin. The poor girl is so afraid of losing your affect! I am sure your are not that type of man who forget all the good moments as soon as a new girl arrives.

 

Lots of love to ALL of your girls. And an touch of good manners to Asuka-chan.

Just when you thought the two were actually going to get along, it was all a dream

 

Of course it couldn't go that smoothly when it comes to tsun vs tsun.

 

I like the outfit Asuka's wearing. The lock on the sweater gives it that extra touch.

 

Thanks, I like the little lock too. And I've always liked Asuka in goth type outfits.

 

Not tempted by Saber's food choices this time! Although, I do like you have the progression of what she's eating disappearing until the restock of what looks like two different sticks of pocky.

 

Well, I guess I can't make you go on a snack run after every story afterall. But I do try to add little details to my stories such as food getting eaten. Depends on what the props let me do of course. And yes it was two sticks of pocky after the ice cream was gone.

I can't take the stress. Poor Rin! I knew right away it was a dream because Asuka was wearing the same clothes and saying things Rin would come up with.

Saber sure scarfed down that ice cream!

 

Well you have to eat ice cream quickly before it melts out here. Especially after you eat all the chocolate coating off first.

 

I kind of feel sorry for Rin. On the other hand, there's something a little karmic about this...

 

Rin and Yukino seem to be actually getting along here, which is good. And Hannah is a truly incredible person, trying to see the good in everyone. Also, she's very cute in the Refreshing Sailor style dress.

 

If it's karma Rin's certainly got some tough times coming. But I think she'll be ok. I'm happy to see that Rin seems to be making a genuine effort to get along with Yukino. I was afraid it was going to be a one time thing as a favor to Hannah, but it looks like it might actually last.

 

And yes, Hannah is an amazing girl. Always positive and seemingly possessing endless patience. The sailor outfit just suits her, especially with the term refreshing in the name of the outfit.

 

Asuka looks great in her punk outfit too. The rock star look suits her personality.

 

Thanks. I like her in that as well. I didn't really think of it as a rock star type look but now that you mention it I can definitely see it.

I was like ok, ok, ok, What, NOOOOOOOO. You ruined Asuka say it is not so. But thank god it was a dream. Great story by the way. You can see it starting to billed up. Whos going to draw blood first. I like Asuka but I would have to put my money on Rin.

 

Haha, no I wouldn't change Asuka's personality like that. That Asuka only exists in Rin's dreams. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I think you're right that there's going to be showdown at some point. I definitely think that Rin's the more dangerous of the two, but I hope it doesn't actually come to the literal spilling of blood.

I was really hoping for an happy ending. But it would not be Asuka them.... I really hope she is not so mean to Rin as she was t Shinji....

 

I fear that Asuka's already on that course. We'll have to see how it goes I guess.

 

Scripple, you will have to be extra loving towards Rin. The poor girl is so afraid of losing your affect! I am sure your are not that type of man who forget all the good moments as soon as a new girl arrives,

 

Hmmm, I guess that depends on her current stance on those kitty outfits. Ok, ok, I'm bad I know. It does look I'll have to let poor Rin know that she hasn't been replaced. I'm not sure she's going to believe me though. I did just get my first Rin wall hanging though, that should make her happy as I have several of Asuka.

 

Lots of love to ALL of your girls. And an touch of good manners to Asuka-chan.

 

I'll pass that on to the girls, I'm sure they'll appreciate it. Well, the love part anyway, I'm guessing the manners comment won't go over so well with Asuka.

I can't take the stress. Poor Rin! I knew right away it was a dream because Asuka was wearing the same clothes and saying things Rin would come up with.

 

Good observation skills you have there. Hopefully you and Rin won't have to suffer too much. I know your Rin's biggest fan. Would you like me pass on your concern to her, or would you rather she not have anything else to worry about at the moment?

Ha ha, great story! I liked how expressive Rin looked in the pics, like she was really rubbing her eyes, snoozing, etc. And the vanising ice cream was brilliant!

 

I also knew it had to be a dream . . . Things had gotten too nice between Rin and Yukino, so now Asuka is mixing it up nicely.

 

Please be safe, scripple! But if either Rin or Asuka kill you, can you tell them they can come live with me afterwards?

Ha ha, great story! I liked how expressive Rin looked in the pics, like she was really rubbing her eyes, snoozing, etc. And the vanising ice cream was brilliant!

 

Thanks for noticing some of the little details, I like when people catch those things. Glad you enjoyed the story.

 

I also knew it had to be a dream . . . Things had gotten too nice between Rin and Yukino, so now Asuka is mixing it up nicely.

 

Uh oh, don't let Billy catch you saying that. He's all happy that Rin and Yukino are starting to get along and here you are calling for more discord.

 

Please be safe, scripple! But if either Rin or Asuka kill you, can you tell them they can come live with me afterwards?

 

Gee, thanks so much for the best wishes. But I'll do my best if one of them kills me to come back to life just long enough to tell them they're welcome at your place.

Great story!! I hope chaos doesn't overwhelm you. 2 superstars in the house is gonna be rough!!

 

Wayne

Great story!! I hope chaos doesn't overwhelm you. 2 superstars in the house is gonna be rough!!

 

Thanks. I hope I survive this as well. Sometimes I wonder what I was thinking when I decided to ask Asuka to come live here.

I don't want to trouble Rin, but please tell her that the lab is cheering for her.

Sorry it took me so long to get to this but it's fantastic.... hehe

 

 

Asuka: "Eeeewwwww! The porn star drooled on the couch! Now where am I going to sit?"

 

LOL

 

Rin was really adorable, I wonder if her dream is an indication of a change of heart? Or just what she feels deep down but will never admit?

 

**James.

Sorry it took me so long to get to this but it's fantastic.... hehe

 

 

Asuka: "Eeeewwwww! The porn star drooled on the couch! Now where am I going to sit?"

 

LOL

 

Rin was really adorable, I wonder if her dream is an indication of a change of heart? Or just what she feels deep down but will never admit?

 

He lives. Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

 

As to Rin's dream, I'm beginning to think she actually is starting to have a change of heart in regards to the "nobodies". She still throws the term around but outside of that she actually seems to be showing respect for Hannah *and* Yukino lately. That's a pretty big change.

 

Asuka: "Where do we keep the disinfectant?"

 

got me. thought it was going to be a happy ending. lol

This family will always have someone to spice things up XD I am sure Rin will make Asuka to respect her in no time. She learn so much in the past months, it won't be hard for her to make Asuka ashamed of her attitude. But then again we are taking about Asuka XD

 

Asuka: "Where do we keep the disinfectant?"

 

got me. thought it was going to be a happy ending. lol

 

Hehehe, thanks. Happy peaceful endings are hard to come by around these parts, especially when it relates to Rin and Asuka. They both have pretty big egos and rough exteriors, so they clash a lot.

 

This family will always have someone to spice things up XD I am sure Rin will make Asuka to respect her in no time. She learn so much in the past months, it won't be hard for her to make Asuka ashamed of her attitude. But then again we are taking about Asuka XD

 

I think Asuka got knocked down a peg or two lately when Saber decided to do some research into her past. While I don't sense much improvement in the relationship between Rin an Asuka I am hoping that this might improve Asuka's relationship with the other girls going forward.