Kitsune's Cure in Action (Mostly covered kitsune nudity)

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Edited June 22, 2018 by Guest

This one had me on the edge of my seat. My heart broke when kitsune realised that her cure did the opposite that she intended, and she offered to sacrifice herself. And I felt proud of Rin for coming to the rescue in the end.

 

Man, that was an emotional read for me. Maybe I'm getting too invested in these stories? . . . Nah, never!

 

Great posing, once again. Saber actually dropped her noodles, it was pretty serious stuff.

This one had me on the edge of my seat. My heart broke when kitsune realised that her cure did the opposite that she intended, and she offered to sacrifice herself. And I felt proud of Rin for coming to the rescue in the end.

 

Man, that was an emotional read for me. Maybe I'm getting too invested in these stories? . . . Nah, never!

 

Great posing, once again. Saber actually dropped her noodles, it was pretty serious stuff.

Thanks a lot of the kind words. It's nice to hear that this story triggered an emotional response as that means my stories are conveying characters that you can care about and relate too. I think that's very import for telling good stories. And a little catharsis can be a good thing.

 

I wonder how things will turn out for kitsune. She did try very hard and seemed quite crushed at how things turned out. It's a good thing that Rin was around and willing to help. I think she cares about people more than she generally lets on.

 

And yes, if Saber's food hits the floor you know something very bad is happening.

Whew... it's a good story. I was thinking that it will go different way but it's good.

Thanks

 

if Saber's food hits the floor you know something very bad is happening.

Wow, a real roller coaster. I thought for sure Kitsune's cure would work, and was pretty surprised at the twist. Rin had to save Asuka after all. And Saber dropped her food!

 

Now the question is what will happen to the group dynamic? Will Asuka be indebted to Rin? I guess Rin's saving her life is negated by Rin's making her sick in the first place. And poor Kitsune!

 

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Thank you for taking the time to make these, they make me happy.

Whew... it's a good story. I was thinking that it will go different way but it's good.

Thanks

 

if Saber's food hits the floor you know something very bad is happening.

 

Wow, a real roller coaster. I thought for sure Kitsune's cure would work, and was pretty surprised at the twist. Rin had to save Asuka after all. And Saber dropped her food!

 

Now the question is what will happen to the group dynamic? Will Asuka be indebted to Rin? I guess Rin's saving her life is negated by Rin's making her sick in the first place. And poor Kitsune!

 

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Thank you for taking the time to make these, they make me happy.

 

Thank you both very much for the kind words and comments. They're what let me know when I'm doing things right so they're always appreciated. I'm glad you both enjoyed the story. And of course, welcome to the scripple amusement park; filled with twists and turns and highs and lows.

 

I'm not sure how this will affect the dynamic. It would seem to complicate it a bit. I'm sure Asuka will definitely stick to your argument that Rin saving her life doesn't in-debt her to Rin as it wouldn't have been necessary in the first place if Rin hadn't cursed her. Of course it's one thing to cling to that publicly, but somewhere inside she'll still have to face the fact that Rin did actually save her.

 

And yes, what of poor kitsune? She tried so hard to help and only made things worse. She seems quite upset.

I agree with PrettyCranium that it was a really suspenseful story and so heartbreaking to see kitsune so sad. I think you were right that you can't trust my health care provider opinions. I love kitsune and hope she feels better about things. She really did try to help. That is wonderful Rin came to save Asuka. I hope this helps them get along a little better. I am hoping it will make Rin appreciate Asuka more having almost lost her and seeing how happy and proud Hannah was that Rin saved her. Rin will also feel like she has the upper hand that she saved Asuka and will hopefully feel more secure in her dealings with her and not lose her temper so easily...maybe. I am not sure Asuka will open up so much to the others yet, but I think the whole experience will make her at least appreciate Steffi staying by her side and supporting her the whole time.

Poooor little Kitsune! She tried so hard. Hopefully Rin doesn't give her too hard of a time after this >_

Hi, it's Natsuki!

 

Wow! Rin really did save Asuka, just like you told me! I was getting kind of worried that you might have just told me that to shut me up... You really got me with that twist with kitsune...

 

Speaking of, it's not kitsune's fault that her cure turned out to be poison. She just didn't know. And, by using it, she did force Rin to cure Asuka!

 

It was nice to see that the other girls care so much about Asuka, and stayed at her side in a time of need.

 

I'm glad to see Rin may turn over a new leaf, since I can't believe many of the others would show up to help if she were sick! I hope she catches her purple haired girlfriend's cold!

 

Give my regards to Asuka!

Natsuki!

I agree with PrettyCranium that it was a really suspenseful story and so heartbreaking to see kitsune so sad. I think you were right that you can't trust my health care provider opinions. I love kitsune and hope she feels better about things. She really did try to help. That is wonderful Rin came to save Asuka. I hope this helps them get along a little better. I am hoping it will make Rin appreciate Asuka more having almost lost her and seeing how happy and proud Hannah was that Rin saved her. Rin will also feel like she has the upper hand that she saved Asuka and will hopefully feel more secure in her dealings with her and not lose her temper so easily...maybe. I am not sure Asuka will open up so much to the others yet, but I think the whole experience will make her at least appreciate Steffi staying by her side and supporting her the whole time.

 

I hope you enjoyed the suspense. And perhaps on medical providers same species would be a good starting point.

 

I hope this calms things between Rin and Asuka, but I really don't know what it's going to do. It seems like it will be a bit awkward for a while I imagine. Somehow I'm not sure increasing Rin's feelings of superiority over Asuka is really going to improve things. I do think Asuka will have a new appreciation for how good of a friend she has in Steffi though, so that's good. I'm not sure how kitsune will respond to this, or what Rin is going to want to do with her either. Could get messy.

 

Poooor little Kitsune! She tried so hard. Hopefully Rin doesn't give her too hard of a time after this >_<

 

Yeah, I'm not sure how Rin is going to take this regarding kitsune. Initial signs say not well. But at least it seems Saber will defend kitsune in this instance, so perhaps kitsune will make it through. Hopefully kitsune's not too distraught either. She seems very very upset over how things turned out. All she really wanted to do was help.

Hi, it's Natsuki!

 

Wow! Rin really did save Asuka, just like you told me! I was getting kind of worried that you might have just told me that to shut me up... You really got me with that twist with kitsune...

 

See, I told you that you should reconsider your position towards Rin. You just might find she's not so bad.

 

Speaking of, it's not kitsune's fault that her cure turned out to be poison. She just didn't know. And, by using it, she did force Rin to cure Asuka!

 

It was nice to see that the other girls care so much about Asuka, and stayed at her side in a time of need.

I agree it's not kitsune's fault, or at least she had no ill intention. Good thing that Rin was there to bail her out though. And I agree it was nice to see the other girls look out for Asuka like they did. Hannah and Steffi are both obviously good people.

 

I'm glad to see Rin may turn over a new leaf, since I can't believe many of the others would show up to help if she were sick! I hope she catches her purple haired girlfriend's cold!

I'm sure the other girls would have looked out for Rin if she needed help as well. They can see what a good person she can be. As for the purple haired girl, that's Rin's sister Sakura. You would do well to remember who she is as I understand she's got a lot of influence over how Asuka interacts with her fans.

I knew Saber was going to be too distracted by food to open the door for Kitsune.

 

I felt really bad for Kitsune when it turned out her cure didn't work. I know how it is being one that cares about others ahead of themselves. If Rin ends up punishing Kitsune, I hope it isn't anything harsh. Hopefully Rin will understand that Kitsune was just trying to help.

All I was thinking was "There's no way she's gonna get killed off, she suffered enough in Evangelion." and I seriously thought it was gonna happen for a minute. Awesome tension.

 

As an aside, I love the stories scripple, just marathoned through all of them in the past 4 hours I've been registered here

I knew Saber was going to be too distracted by food to open the door for Kitsune.

Haha, yeah, anytime you find Saber not doing what she's supposed to be doing it's almost certainly food related.

 

I felt really bad for Kitsune when it turned out her cure didn't work. I know how it is being one that cares about others ahead of themselves. If Rin ends up punishing Kitsune, I hope it isn't anything harsh. Hopefully Rin will understand that Kitsune was just trying to help.

 

It's is a bummer that kitsune's cure didn't work. She was trying so hard and you're right she was definitely more concerned about Asuka than herself. I know Saber won't let any physical harm come to kitsune over this as Saber knows kitsune was trying to help, but I'm not sure she'll do much if Rin decides to heap even more scorn and derision on kitsune. Right now I'm mostly worried about how bad kitsune was feeling even without anyone else piling on. I hope she can forgive herself.

All I was thinking was "There's no way she's gonna get killed off, she suffered enough in Evangelion." and I seriously thought it was gonna happen for a minute. Awesome tension.

 

Yes it seems Asuka was just not meant to have a happy life, including ending up at my place. Maybe things will turn around for her someday. But thank you for letting me know the story conveyed the tension and gravity of the situation, much appreciated.

 

As an aside, I love the stories scripple, just marathoned through all of them in the past 4 hours I've been registered here

 

Wow, marathoning through all of them, awesome. Thank you very much! I hope you used my new story archive so I know someone got some use out of it.

Wow, marathoning through all of them, awesome. Thank you very much! I hope you used my new story archive so I know someone got some use out of it.

 

I did actually, worked out very well, maybe a bit of css styling to make it easier on the eyes (plain black text on a white background does that ) but I've linked the archive to all my other dollfie loving friends, spread that love