The End of (Donut) Tyranny!

Story Line Dead.

Edited June 22, 2018 by Guest

LOL! Rider armed with Fluttershy, that is absolutely priceless! And Ilya is a devious weasel. We're lucky she didn't get too much time alone with Pancake and/or Sayuri, because that almost certainly would have ended badly.

Scripple, I am seriously in pain right now from reading this story. My sides are killing me due to laughing so hard! XD

 

Where to start tho? At first I was like HOLY SH!TCAKES! You did a Rider custom?? DAMN! That outfit is just too awesome! And the wig works great too.

 

But when Rider busted out her Noble Phantasm and it was Fluttershy, I literally about fell out of my chair! I sooo didn't see that coming! And I'm guessing neither did Saber.

 

And I was also not expecting to see Yukino as Rider! I was kind of thinking your *other* girl would be making her debut but I suppose not. Still, Sabers questioning about Yukinos eyes was an excellent detail! Very cool....

 

Illya at the end was also hilarious.... all she wanted was donuts! You need to do beter at feeding your other girls and not just Saber.

 

Great side story tho sir, this is one for the books. Your comedic talent shines thru on this.

 

EDIT: I just saw Poofies comment and I totally agree... Illya and Sayuri do NOT need to meet up again! That would mean sure disaster! those two meeting would be almost as bad as my Rei and Agatha meeting up.

 

 

 

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lol! Sneaky Illya!! She seams to have won this round lol.

That is so awesome! You are so cool, scripple!

Very nice story. The way you thinks in so many details is amazing!

It seems that Ilya knows the best way to separate Saber from her snacks. The wonderful power of distraction.

 

My jaw dropped from seeing the Rider outfit and I will say that Yukino does a pretty good job of being in it.

LOL! Rider armed with Fluttershy, that is absolutely priceless! And Ilya is a devious weasel. We're lucky she didn't get too much time alone with Pancake and/or Sayuri, because that almost certainly would have ended badly.

 

I thought you might enjoy this story being the pony fan you are. At least Ilya got some good use out of her gift right? And yes, it's good that they Ilya, Pancake and Sayuri didn't get to spend much time together at the meet or I'm sure much mischief would have occurred.

 

Scripple, I am seriously in pain right now from reading this story. My sides are killing me due to laughing so hard! XD

 

Sorry about that, but at least laughing is one of the better ways to hurt right? XD

 

Where to start tho? At first I was like HOLY bleep! You did a Rider custom?? DAMN! That outfit is just too awesome! And the wig works great too.

Just cosplay, no custom. Thanks on the outfit and wig. I just happened to have that wig lying around as it came in a big bundle of DD stuff. When I picked up the outfit I figured this wig would work pretty well.

 

But when Rider busted out her Noble Phantasm and it was Fluttershy, I literally about fell out of my chair! I sooo didn't see that coming! And I'm guessing neither did Saber.

 

And I was also not expecting to see Yukino as Rider! I was kind of thinking your *other* girl would be making her debut but I suppose not. Still, Sabers questioning about Yukinos eyes was an excellent detail! Very cool....

Yeah fluttershy was the main inspiration for this story. I had to do something with her after kymaera was nice enough to go out and buy her for me (even if it was a for a joke.) And I thought Noble Phantasm Fluttershy sounded pretty funny.

 

And clearly Saber didn't see Fluttershy or Rider Yukino coming. She was quite confused by the whole thing, thus her questioning that Yukino really was Rider. But Yukino's eyes do have the right color and level of wildness to be a good stand in for Rider's even if they're not actually quite the right style. I'm glad you enjoyed that little detail.

 

Illya at the end was also hilarious.... all she wanted was donuts! You need to do beter at feeding your other girls and not just Saber.

 

Great side story tho sir, this is one for the books. Your comedic talent shines thru on this.

 

I'm glad you enjoyed Ilya's little antics. She really enjoys over the top productions for small things. I guess her wealthy upbringing influenced that.

 

As for the food, I try to keep it in stock, but it's so hard to keep sweets around. When Saber gets a hankering for something it disappears soooooo fast.

 

Thanks for the kind praise. I figured I needed to do a good comedy story after a small run of more serious ones.

 

EDIT: I just saw Poofies comment and I totally agree... Illya and Sayuri do NOT need to meet up again! That would mean sure disaster! those two meeting would be almost as bad as my Rei and Agatha meeting up.

 

I guess if there's another meetup, especially one that is more of a sit down meet, I need to leave Ilya at home.

lol! Sneaky Illya!! She seams to have won this round lol.

 

Haha, it was a sad day for poor Saber. She missed out on most of the last of the donuts! She was quite upset with Ilya after this until I got the next order of donuts in.

 

That is so awesome! You are so cool, scripple!

 

Thank you very much mitsuki!

 

Very nice story. The way you thinks in so many details is amazing!

 

Thank you too Saluli. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and all the little details I try to put in them. Thanks for noticing.

 

It seems that Ilya knows the best way to separate Saber from her snacks. The wonderful power of distraction.

 

My jaw dropped from seeing the Rider outfit and I will say that Yukino does a pretty good job of being in it.

 

Ilya's smart enough to know you can't meet someone of Saber's power head on. So trickery and guile are required with distraction being the technique used in this particular case.

 

I had to snatch the Rider outfit when I saw it, I'm glad you like it too. I agree Yukino wears it well.

Ha ha ha! This one is out of sync with the timeline, but hilarious! Ilya won this round. I don't know much about Fate/Stay, but that Rider cosplay is amazing. For a second there, I really thought you had a new girl!

 

I think Saber needs to beware of that pony. Clearly it has a lot of magic power and is just biding its time to take over your entire household.

Wow, this had me laughing. What a great story! I was not expecting the My Little Pony twist. Amazing and adorable at the same time. What will you think of next?

Ha ha ha! This one is out of sync with the timeline, but hilarious! Ilya won this round. I don't know much about Fate/Stay, but that Rider cosplay is amazing. For a second there, I really thought you had a new girl!

 

I think Saber needs to beware of that pony. Clearly it has a lot of magic power and is just biding its time to take over your entire household.

 

I figured I needed to break up some of the more somber stories of late with a good pure laughs one.

 

I'm glad you could enjoy the humor even without a good Fate/Stay Night background and liked Yukino's little cosplay. Did you guess right which of my girls would play with a MLP?

 

I'm pretty sure the pony is on Saber's watch list since it was involved in the most heinous of crimes short of murder: donut theft!

 

Wow, this had me laughing. What a great story! I was not expecting the My Little Pony twist. Amazing and adorable at the same time. What will you think of next?

 

Glad to hear you got some laughs. As with PC I wasn't sure how this story would go over for people not familiar with Fate/Stay Night. Seems the concept of divine beast MLP stands on it's own humor wise.

 

As for the MLP twist, that was actually the whole inspiration for this story. I was given the MLP at a local meeting of DD owners and decided to put it to good use. And no one, not even me, knows what I'll think of next.

I think Saber may be sending Ilya, Yukino and Fluttershy to the Rainbow Factory soon.

I think Saber may be sending Ilya, Yukino and Fluttershy to the Rainbow Factory soon.

Wait. I thought Fluttershy ran the Rainbow Factory? Maybe just owns it?

LOL! That was the cutest summoning ever. Forget the donuts. Yukino is boss as Rider!

Wow Did you make her pink and black outfit? It goes great with your doll.

Haha, that was great! Yukino makes a good Rider. And her Noble Phantasm suits her well!

 

What will Ilya do for donuts next time? Yukino in a foam Berserker suit?

LOL! That was the cutest summoning ever. Forget the donuts. Yukino is boss as Rider!

 

Thank you. Yeah the donuts weren't really the purpose of this story, it was all about the divine beast!

 

Wow Did you make her pink and black outfit? It goes great with your doll.

 

No, I purchased it. But I'm glad you like it on Yukino.

 

Haha, that was great! Yukino makes a good Rider. And her Noble Phantasm suits her well!

 

What will Ilya do for donuts next time? Yukino in a foam Berserker suit?

 

Thank you on Rider. And I wouldn't put it past Ilya on the Berserker suit. She's very creative about getting what she wants.

Not us what this Berserker suit looks like, but I want to see it!

 

Ilya is the sneakiness of your girls . . . People a distracted by Rin, but Ilya might actually be the one running the place!