Bad End ???

Story Line Dead.

Edited June 22, 2018 by Guest

Your pics and story are interesting. What did you do wrong that resulted in a bad end? Lol

That's a nice story ^^ I felt like in a theatre

 

Saber: "Must get chocolate before I disappear!"

 

Haha it was so funny

That's a nice story ^^ I felt like in a theatre

 

Saber: "Must get chocolate before I disappear!"

 

Haha it was so funny

 

Agreed, this was funny. They must not have chocolate wherever Saber is in between summoning.

Heh, good ol' Saber. It's nice she was still herself right til the end.

 

Fun story and a really odd way to introduce Iilya. Congrats on getting her tho, now your Fate/Stay girls are complete!

 

I really like the new outfit on Yukino, I'd like to see more of that. And it was nice to see Saber in her alternate outfit, thats one of my favorites.

 

 

Billy

Your pics and story are interesting. What did you do wrong that resulted in a bad end? Lol

 

Thanks. Hmm, I guess according to Ilya my crime was giving them delicious cake, but how could that be wrong?

 

That's a nice story ^^ I felt like in a theatre

 

Saber: "Must get chocolate before I disappear!"

 

Haha it was so funny

 

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the stories and I appreciate the feedback. I try to have some humor in most of my stories. If you follow my Saber much you'll see she really enjoys her chocolate (and sweets in general).

 

Agreed, this was funny. They must not have chocolate wherever Saber is in between summoning.

 

Thanks. I'm pretty sure there's no chocolate where she disappears to, and that they didn't have chocolate in England back in her time. It's a good thing or she probably wouldn't have made history like she did.

Heh, good ol' Saber. It's nice she was still herself right til the end.

 

Fun story and a really odd way to introduce Iilya. Congrats on getting her tho, now your Fate/Stay girls are complete!

 

Hmm, Saber's disappearing action being to grab for chocolate probably doesn't bode well for her kicking her addiction does it? XD

 

Glad you enjoyed the story, I know how much you love DD violence and death.

 

As for Ilya, this seemed like a perfectly normal way to introduce her in by my household's standards. She even got to do lots of cute poses and all. You're just shocked you didn't know about her until midway through the story.

Ha, what a funny story! Clearly, Ilya thinks you should've given to cake to her!

That was fantastic! Ilya is so adorable! Saber is hilarious as usual. I am sure if I played the game, it would have even more impact. I appreciate it as a clever and cool idea for Ilya's introduction even without prior knowledge of the Tiger Dojo.

Hmm, Saber's disappearing action being to grab for chocolate probably doesn't bode well for her kicking her addiction does it? XD

 

Ha ha! No it doesnt but thats ok, I like Saber as she is, she's perfect!

 

As for Ilya, this seemed like a perfectly normal way to introduce her in by my household's standards. She even got to do lots of cute poses and all. You're just shocked you didn't know about her until midway through the story.

 

I suppose that's normal for you guys. And yes, she did get to do all sorts of adorable poses too. She best enjoy it while she can tho. I'm sure next week she'll be attacked or humiliated in one way or another. And no , I don't mean by Yukino.

 

You did indeed catch me off guard with her. I sure didn't expect to see her at your place. Hopefully she can fit in with your merry band of Dollfies.

 

 

Billy

Ha, what a funny story! Clearly, Ilya thinks you should've given to cake to her!

 

Thanks. Yes, she probably set the whole story up just to get the other girls to leave the cake for her.

 

That was fantastic! Ilya is so adorable! Saber is hilarious as usual. I am sure if I played the game, it would have even more impact. I appreciate it as a clever and cool idea for Ilya's introduction even without prior knowledge of the Tiger Dojo.

 

Thanks for the high praise. I thought this would be a fun way to introduce Ilya, especially since the little gym outfit she's wearing is from the Tiger Dojo portion of the game. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 

She best enjoy it while she can tho. I'm sure next week she'll be attacked or humiliated in one way or another. And no , I don't mean by Yukino.

 

So negative.

 

Hopefully she can fit in with your merry band of Dollfies.

 

Thanks. I'm sure she'll fit in fine. She's already knows most of the girls and she's always been a little off kilter anyway.

Congratulation for Illya ><

I hope you can see the "good ending" during the next time you play!

Congratulation for Illya ><

I hope you can see the "good ending" during the next time you play!

 

Thanks. The girls don't necessarily all get along great, but they usually don't kill each other so I'm pretty sure things will be fine going forward.

Another great story scripple! Poor Hannah trying to be the peacemaker and ends up getting knocked off. I couldn't get the song "Peacemaker Die" by Extreme out of my head.

 

I'm a big Yukino fan but I have to admit, I don't think I'd trust her with a loaded fully automatic weapon. I'm a bit surprised to see Sakura take the first action, she seems like the cool headed one most of the time. haha

Another great story scripple! Poor Hannah trying to be the peacemaker and ends up getting knocked off. I couldn't get the song "Peacemaker Die" by Extreme out of my head.

 

I'm a big Yukino fan but I have to admit, I don't think I'd trust her with a loaded fully automatic weapon. I'm a bit surprised to see Sakura take the first action, she seems like the cool headed one most of the time. haha

 

Thanks, I'm glad you're continuing to enjoy my stories.

 

Sakura and Hannah have been a little touchy with each other lately, but nothing close to what this story would make it seem. This was just acting for Ilya's sake so they were all doing their best bad acting hammy roles. Do you really think Rin would let Yukino near her with a loaded gun?

I'm glad no DD was seriously hurt in the making of this bad end.... Poor Yukino chan tho

I'm glad no DD was seriously hurt in the making of this bad end.... Poor Yukino chan tho

 

Yes, maybe next time Yukino will line up next to someone other than Rin.